Nessa Tat II

So I did a bit more work on this. The friend I'm doing it for said that the symbols behind the triquetra made it look less like a tattoo. To make the symbols more inclusive, I darkened them in color (in terms of graphics, this meant completely redrawing them on a separate layer) and redid the outline of the image to wrap them in as well. 

I toyed with the idea of just updating the other submission with this image, but I figured it may be better for getting feedback if they were separate images here on dA. (:

Here's the original:
 


Feel free to let me know what you think - whether it's better/worse than the last iteration in terms of design for a tattoo, are the symbols more inclusive to the design, is anything obviously in need of repair, etc.